Thesis: The
Millennial Generation has a different sense of spirituality than previous
generations in which they have lost their sense of tradition, have the freedom
to choose any religion (or not) and fail to commit or participate in one.
Body Paragraph:
Millennials
no longer attend church services as much because they feel they are no longer
bound by age-old traditions passed down by their predecessors. Traditions like attending
church as a family, volunteering in a ministry or church events are things now
uncommon among Generation Y. They don’t feel that sense of duty their parents
and grandparents once did. The reason is because Generation Me was raised to believe
that they’re special, that they should do what makes them happy and to not
worry what others think. Back then it was the other way around. People would
put everyone and everything first before even thinking of themselves. Amy
Frykholm argues about GenMe’s ancestors in Loose
Connections, “They created and enthusiastically participated in voluntary
organizations, including churches. Americans were not constrained by duty or
tradition to join churches, but they did” (2). Meaning they weren’t literally
forced to but still did because that’s how they were raised. When asked how
many millennials were volunteering at our church, Father Jose Salazar who’s a
priest at Corpus Christi Catholic Church quickly answered, “Not enough.
Overall, the amount of young people volunteering here is at about 15-20%.” I
wasn’t surprised, there are a lot of young people that go to our church but the
majority of them are forced to attend because of their parents. And from that
group, only a third of those people are actually involved in church related
activities or groups. Alan Miller and Takashi Nakamura have found in their
study, On the Stability of Church
Attendance Patterns During a Time of Demographic Change: 1965-1988 that, “Post-WWII
cohorts attend church far less frequently than their predecessors” (8). Alan
Miller is a member of the Faculty of Letters at Hokkaido University located in
Sapporo Japan. Takashi Nakamura is faculty of the Institute of Statistical
Mathematics located in Tokyo, Japan. Miller and Nakamura used a survey ranging
from the year 1972 to 1990 called the cumulative General Social Survey along
with other studies from the past, all focusing on church attendance among
Americans nationwide. Miller and Nakamura come to find that, “…the baby boomers
appear to be no different from previous cohorts in that increased age leads to
increased religiosity. Although as a cohort they attend church far less
frequently than their predecessors, results show that as they age they display
the expected increases in church attendance” (7). Could it be possible that
Generation Y will also attend church more as they age? Or could it be that they
want to be traditional just like their parents? When asked if he noticed an
increase or decrease in attendance by millennials over the past few years,
Father Salazar happily said, “I’ve noticed an increase in attendance because I
think that more and more people want to have those traditions back and they
also want to feel more like their parents.” It could be maturity kicking in for
the millennials. Nevertheless, they’re still being raised to do whatever they
feel is right for them.
I think maybe you should've explained how thinking that they are especial has to do with not attending church. That point is still not clear to me. I don't really see the relation.
ReplyDeleteI think that is good that you consider that Millennials go to church because they are forced by their parents or maybe because they are maturing. i didn't know that there was an increase in attendance, i thought it was a decrease.
I really like your topic becuase i also have noticed this in my life and makes this enjoyable to read. I really like you thesis you did a great job stating your topic and including your mapping sentece. The flow of this was very good as well the quotes were well placed.
ReplyDeleteExcellent thesis and also how well you incorporated the scientific sources. They felt like they fit right in place as you were reading and make your paper not only interesting but more credible to me. Also I like how you included the priest's point of view because who knows more about a church than a preist right?
ReplyDeleteGood topic. This is a topic that is very common in our generation. It's not surprising to see the low statistics of members of Generation Y that attend church. Just look around at all your friends and you can count the ones who attend church regularly
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