Thesis:
“He's the best player in the game.
It's just that simple. There's nothing that Kobe Bryant can't do…” Those are
only a few words that were enthusiastically shouted by an NBA analyst, in the
introduction of a song that Lil Wayne, a well known rapper, made about Kobe
Bryant. This is only one small part of my argument that the NBA has evolved
over generations, specifically in the millennial generation. The game has
become globally involved; it is because of the diversification that has taken
place within the whole game. The NBA is now made up of different races;
versatile players and new personas added by the hip hop culture.
Body Paragraph:
Millennials have evolved the NBA to
make it globally involved with it now consisting of many different races. There
are more international players in the NBA now than ever before and the reason
behind this is because we have big names like Yao Ming, Dirk Nowitzki, Ricky
Rubio, Manu Ginobili, and Jeremy Lin contributing to the internationalization. Entering
the 2010-2011 season an all-time record high of 84 international players was
set in the NBA. I could not put it in any better words than Thomas Oates and
Judy Polumbaum as they wrote in the Agile
Big Man: The Flexible Marketing of Yao Ming, “Beyond [Yao’s] utility as
corporate pitchman and draw for his team, Yao Ming’s presence on an NBA roster
is hugely important to the league’s design for global expansion” (194). As Yao
Ming’s existence on an NBA team is globally promoted, millennial
generation kids from all over the world are influenced to play the game of
basketball and follow their dreams to play at the professional level since they
see that it is possible for different races other than Americans or African
Americans to play in the NBA. “At the same time, Yao Ming brings an unfamiliar
model to the hyper-masculine arena of US-style commoditized basketball,” (191) argued Oates and Polumbaum, which is in fact
really good for the NBA because it brings variety to the sport. The variety in
the sport is what makes people want to watch because they can feel more into
the game as they can root for their own race or country that different players
may be representing. It is a big reason why basketball is one of the most
popular sports in our generation. In an interview of my basketball basketball
coach, Roland Watts, who played in the NBA Development league and also coached
my high school team and I, leading us to win the State Championship, I was able
to ask him personally how he felt about the NBA being so internationally
involved now and he answered passionately, “I LOVE IT! It’s great because the
NBA is not limited to just the best of one city, state, or country, these are the
best of the world.” The NBA now, even has foreign players drafted straight from
overseas that get the opportunity to display their talents on All Star weekend.
The opportunity for foreign players helps the sport grow and makes it more fun
with a variety of international players, playing a different type of game
because of where they are from. For example, Ricky Rubio from Spain is a point
guard and growing up in a soccer country playing and watching soccer in his
younger years helps him in his style of play, passing the ball with smartness
and accuracy. “He can pass that ball,” are the exact words that even superstar
Lebron James has tweeted after seeing him play in his first season (2011-2012) in the NBA. In the sport of soccer the way to win is
by passing the ball, Ricky Rubio’s ability to see
the open court with his peripheral vision aids his decision making that coaches
love about him and what foreign players can bring to the game.
Awesome! I love this topic. Watching sports with many races and nationalities definitely makes the game more interesting to watch :)
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ReplyDeleteEverything sounded good. You used a lot of specific examples. Basketball is growing world wide and their are leagues in almost every counrty, but the best come play in the NBA.
ReplyDeleteVery nice topic and thesis. It really makes people to read this paper because NBA is one one the popular sports this generation. Also Your body paragraph have interesting story.
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